Wow...i love what u have so far. i can't wait to read more.

Wow...i love what u have so far. i can't wait to read more.

This is a very very excellent. i loved it. i added to my favorite poems list. This is so good. I loved it. i like the parts where she escaped but he followed her tracks. he kept the escape convint place a secret. i liked the dog. to he seemed quite annoying to the soldier. it was funny. yup i read the whole thing. i loved each section and i felt it. the pain excellently written you should write an update to it.

Hmmm...

I'm not gonna lie, there were so many typos it almost aggrivated me lol. The plot was cute but i think it was a bit too cliche for my taste. The ending doesn't really suit it very well >_<

overall, 3/5

Cliche my ass.. Dont listen toy that last comment that girl aint know what was gonna happen and 3/5 bull that deserved a 100/5 lol that was so good i loved it... You did a great job!!!!