Wow that was deep nice ending i give it a 4.5 rounding up to a 5 maybe u can read one of mine.

I think you killed her!!! sorry that was a genius moment, the ending was good though.
i have a question though you said you destroyed my heat is that supposed to be heat or heart, just wondering?
5/5 good job

Short and innocently dark and sad. i like it

Wow. deep. your writing is truly amazing. you always put such depth behind every word. this poem was just remarkable.
--lovedroughtmelody

Eh, know this feeling all to well. this poem can can go in so many directions. but the style is so beautiful. great job in making this piece whatever the reader wanted it to be for them. keep up the good work! :]

5/5

That was amazing