WOWOWOWOWOW!!! I've missed your talent Gem! This is just so beautiful! I loved loved loved it. Seriously you're writing is on a completely different level than so many poems I read here. This is just brilliant with amazing phrasiology and wonderful descriptions and unique wording. Fantasic, girl! Keep it up and 5/5 as always! :)
~Midnight Sun

BEAUTIFUL POEM! I LOVED your first two lines. What a power packed beginning and a good conclusion! I truly loved the whole piece! It's amazing Gem! Glad to see a new poem from you!
Charisma*

Gem
Very sad poem. The deep sadness comes through in your words.

They wither and fall, drifting to the floor
The beautiful colours are now nevermore
Floating to the ground in a pile so neat
The signal the end of a life pure and sweet

These lines are heart wrenching.
Excellent job!
Missed you glad to see you back :)
Love Cindy

Gem girl what an amazing piece !

However, this has many different meanings so interpret at will...)
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At first I interpreted it one way then I saw a whole different meaning behind it. It may be short but it sure packs a lot of punch and make one sit back and really think.

Glad to see ya back writing again Gem
Luanne

I missed reading your poems :) im glad you posted this, it can be taken in a lot of different ways for me theres rain but someday the clouds have to clear. 5/5

This is really good. I really like how it all flows together. The imagery is beautiful. 5/5 =]

Wow amazing.
I loved it the whole poem was amazing.
I wish i had your writers block haha.
wow.

Much love.

A VERY touching piece of poetry. i really liked this stanza the best

"Light coral pinks and dark cornflower blues
Dark olive greens and some pale honeydews
All of them wilted, misplacing their shine
Losing the battle and race against time"

beautifully written!
xD
~NinjaGirl~

Wow gem, just plainly amazing like you always do. I missed your talent and you cant say that was writers block! that is wow amazing my dear. hope all is well with you.

Love
Chelsea

Gem

i wish i could come up with something like this when i have writes block

"The signal the end of a life pure and sweet"

That is my favorite line. Has an innocence about it. Maybe an innocent life now gone. I thought it was a truely beautiful piece. I really enjoyed reading that one. (5/5). Take care.

Kelly
xx

This is so beautifully written.
I loved the imagery you portrayed in this, it left lasting vivid images in my mind, flow was good throughout and as always you managed to pull of a stunning ending.

Enchanting. I liked the seeming plaintive ambiance throughout this piece. It induces a sense of melancholy and sorrow inside of me - I'm certain of it.

"All of them wilted, misplacing their shine
Losing the battle and race against time"

With this couplet, you've managed to say volumes of meanings. How unnaturally natural the cycle of life by way of time and space can also be naturally unnatural. Hm.

It's a very poignant work, m'dear. Glad to see you posting once again! It's a delight to read, indeed! Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care. ~Debbie

Thats s good poem n_n yep, life is short =) but well, through it we learn more than we know =) hey take a look through my poems n_n

Excellent Gem! would never have guessed you have writer's block....lol.....
Love all the colorful expressions and images....great job!

Awesome job..very well done 5/5 :)

Gem

You have so many wonderful lines in thsi poem. A wonderful read.

Writer's block be damned, you did a beautiful job.

Always,
Jeannie

Excellent poem. It was a joy to read from the start to the end. I saw no mistakes, no errors. Great job, keep it up.

Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

U made the subject mater work very well. i like the style of rhyming

This was fantastic and the first commentor said you had writers block ? bloody hell...cant wait to read your stuff without it !!! good luck and a great job ! xx

I agree