Awww i can relate to this poem very much. it's so sad, but its true. its what every girl wants. this was amazing. i hope you find a guy like that someday.
keep on writing 5/5

~Kristina

Absolutely beautiful!! another brilliant bit of poetry from yourself. I can totally relate to this poem, to find the perfect partner. Wouldn't that be a dream come true.

"its what every girl wants"

Some of us guys want that too!!

Poem is really good.
Everytime I've let myself fall
I've been broken and my dreams were shattered.
I just walk and pick up the pieces of myself
and try to hold myself together.-that stanza leaves great impression.
I know that I'm just dreaming him up
but wouldn't that be great?-I don't like this lines.
It is unique and very unusual love poem, which is great. It deserves 5/5.