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by Independence Forever Jul 3, 2007
Special events /
The crowd gathers, cheers pierce the air
men, women, and children, not one a care
years before an army marched across this city street
but now the lane is host to a far different life beat
where once a war torn army dug in for a final assault
independence celebrations deliver a different result
true war was this street's purpose then
citizens don't even remember when
the brave men set in their hearts as vague and gray
caring only for their celebrations on independence day
"bayonets forward!" went the resounding cry
now you only hear the call for more filling pie
brave men, i salute you for your hard work, with no pay
for you gave me the luxury of this independence day
Well penned.....even though simply but so inspiring write yet very patriotic, my pleasure to read.
That was sweet David! I loved it! 5/5 of course! ^_^
This was great, a great job avid, keep it up and dont let others bring you down
Again, great poem. this one had just more to it.
i liked how you talked about people's ignorance. many people slowly start to forget the soul purpose of many holidays, and sadly this is one of them.
by Lemon Squeezy
I can't believe nonone has commented on this yet. I'm to be the 1st to say good job