I can't believe nonone has commented on this yet. I'm to be the 1st to say good job

Again, great poem. this one had just more to it.

i liked how you talked about people's ignorance. many people slowly start to forget the soul purpose of many holidays, and sadly this is one of them.

5/5.

This was great, a great job avid, keep it up and dont let others bring you down

That was sweet David! I loved it! 5/5 of course! ^_^

Well penned.....even though simply but so inspiring write yet very patriotic, my pleasure to read.