Comments : Ignorance and pie

  • 10 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    I can't believe nonone has commented on this yet. I'm to be the 1st to say good job

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Again, great poem. this one had just more to it.

    i liked how you talked about people's ignorance. many people slowly start to forget the soul purpose of many holidays, and sadly this is one of them.

    5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This was great, a great job avid, keep it up and dont let others bring you down

  • 10 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    That was sweet David! I loved it! 5/5 of course! ^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Well penned.....even though simply but so inspiring write yet very patriotic, my pleasure to read.