Comments : Open Thought

  • 10 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I can tell you are a very intellegent person by this. You're like me in a way too. I love to "write out loud."Makes the poetry even more personal. 5/5

    ps: ty for the comment you left me.

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wonderful job.
    I could only find one mistake...

    "We all go threw the same process we all live the same life style"
    ^ Isn't "threw" supposed to be "through"?? :/ *shrugs*

    Anyway, I love this one. I've thought about this quite a few times && I'm glad that someone has made it into a poem. :] It had a nice flow & I loved the meaning. Fantastic job. 5.5 :]

    - Steph <3

    && Thank you for the comment.

  • 10 years ago

    by Erin

    Wow this is amazing eric... like im speachless... proabbly my favorite poem of yours so far... tell me when theres more new peoms n ill be sure to check em out

    love yeaa buddy

  • 10 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    I think this is a wonderful write, full of expression, emotion, and truth. There were a few spelling errors and grammatical things, such as "there"
    needing to be "their", "are" needing to be "our" etc. But over all a pretty fluid, thoughtful outpour.

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    *N

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome write, very meaningful. The flow was good, keep it up.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really good poem. The flow was great and the wording perfect. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    Just amazing, how u equal everybody in this poem. You must be very intellegent. Thinking out loud, really loved it all, thinking about life itself and how it really is. A great idea. Nice chose of words. Really meaningful.
    I loved this thought : things tend to only last a short while, it's so true, life always changeing so fast and so on.
    Really enjoyed this piece!
    5/5

  • Wow, this poem absolutely left me speechless. It had so many touching words. The image from this was very powerful and the flow was just perfect. Really good job with this one.