A poem which has depth in every line.keep it up.nature fascinates you-the bee,the rain-this is life.

Hey i love your work... this one has such a pull and its an excellent read.... great work....

Crystal...

I didn't know you posted again.
This poem was amazing, not many like this are written. It's always the small things in life that mean the most. Really did enjoy reading this. 5/5

` Liz =]

Wow amazing wrok
keep it up!
-Lisa

Very well written! amazing job....5/5

Great rhymes. Love it a lot!!! 5/5 without doubt!!!

Excellent, This poem has a brilliant rhyming flow and i liked the chioce of wording used
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Great job, your a very good writter

Love it.