Be Mine Again

by Lady Nik   Jul 17, 2007


I'm stuck behind this glass
Wishing to pass
Through your eyes
For the last time tonight
Trying so hard
To find someway back to your heart
Just hold me
Like old times
And say "I love you,
And I'm so glad you're mine"
But I can't make you love me
The way I love you
I'm just finding my way through
Through this life
Without you

I'm stuck beneath this pain
Wanting to erase this shame
Still holding on to the past
Trying to remember
Why we didn't last
I promised you
Forever
But I got goodbye
I see now that
You need better
But I still cry
In my room
All by myself
Missing you
Never wanting anyone else

I'm lost beyond your voice
Faced with this choice
To reminisce
Or try to live
Knowing there is no life
Without you
I have no one
To help me get through
So what do I do?
I just want you back
It's been so long since
I've smiled or laughed.
I never wanted this to end
I love you so much
Just be mine again.

* I think this poem sucks, so plz tell me what you think. Thank Shanik*

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  • 14 years ago

    by mandy

    This poem is very pure. I love the raw truth in your poems; it's very refreshing.

    Your poem does NOT suck. I think what might have bothered you about it would be the simple rhyme you used. I do that quite often myself, and LOVE the idea of the poem, but the wording is wrong. A thesaurus can be your best friend :P

    Besides, I believe there is no such as "bad poetry" if it comes from the heart :)

    Nice write,

    mandy

  • 16 years ago

    by Toni

    OMG! can i like show this to my ex? cuz seriously this is exactly how i feel! you are amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Talent in its purest form!

  • 16 years ago

    by Misus3d.N.Abus3d

    OMG!!! this is the best I have ever read...I really felt it, I felt every word probably because I can relate but other than that, its amazing. The best I have ever seen.

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