Very good vocabulary you have. I enjoed the message. And I only got lost and had to re-read lines a few times. It was a nicely written poem.
4/5

The ending was rather off I thought, but a good read. Although it doesn't appear to have structure, it does. I do rather like this one.

I agree that the vocabulary is stunning and the end is interesting but well written. The flow is flawless, and the point of this piece is awesome. Somehow I understood it with just one read it unlike those who have commented before...

I don't know if you really understood it. It's talking about drug addiction.