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  • Good poem.
    It flowed well and the imagery was good.
    Keep it up 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    Woow .. amazing poem .. wonderful ... i love it ..
    so emotional and and great :D .. good job

    keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by tasha

    Good poem and thanx for ur commen-t -so much it helps alot

  • 11 years ago

    by Anton

    Great poem, It is uniquly written that what i like about it.
    Thanx 4 comment it was uplifting.

  • 11 years ago

    by chavii

    Still awaiting.... these words seems to be timeless holding all the emotions hope, pain entiwned together.

    Good write
    chavii.

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    This neat work was real nice. The seemingly melancholic emotions emanated by your words made me breathless for a moment. They danced across the page like the cherry blossoms in spring... How endearing. What's more, I liked the idea of a hopelessly hopeful person patiently waiting to be loved by the one who brought back the colors in his life. Beautiful and heartfelt to say the least. All the best and take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    This is a really great poem.
    i love it
    i could tell where you were coming from
    and what you were trying to say
    and how you were feeling
    and it takes loads of talent to be able to make readers see that
    keep up the good work (:
    <3jess

  • 11 years ago

    by Katran

    Fantastic poem. i don;t what else i can say. beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Its a beautiful and a nice job! well done dear. write more and let me know...

    Nazeer

  • 11 years ago

    by StephanieH

    Wow, nicely done!! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Beautiful writings..
    Excellent thoughts..
    Marvelous outlooks..
    Fantastic feelings..
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    Write more, feel more and be with me for reading and commenting.. I like your poems very much indeed... 5/5

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    Nazeer

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Really nice job
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Nope...not cool. Thats too awsome. Why must you be so talented and able to express you emotions in such a beautiful way?????

  • 10 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Thats so beautiful...i had a dream about everyting aruond me moving at lightning fast speed yet i was still...your poem really relates to that...where are we in this world? Everything is moving but we are waiting for people we lvoe...it is amazing...

  • 10 years ago

    by Heba

    It was really so touching and so sad.It reminded of some friends who I have lost them many years ago,but still haven't lost the hope to see them again.

    well done 5\5...