This neat work was real nice. The seemingly melancholic emotions emanated by your words made me breathless for a moment. They danced across the page like the cherry blossoms in spring... How endearing. What's more, I liked the idea of a hopelessly hopeful person patiently waiting to be loved by the one who brought back the colors in his life. Beautiful and heartfelt to say the least. All the best and take care.
This is a really great poem.
i love it
i could tell where you were coming from
and what you were trying to say
and how you were feeling
and it takes loads of talent to be able to make readers see that
keep up the good work (:
Thats so beautiful...i had a dream about everyting aruond me moving at lightning fast speed yet i was still...your poem really relates to that...where are we in this world? Everything is moving but we are waiting for people we lvoe...it is amazing...