Good poem.
It flowed well and the imagery was good.
Keep it up 5/5

Woow .. amazing poem .. wonderful ... i love it ..
so emotional and and great :D .. good job

keep it up

Good poem and thanx for ur commen-t -so much it helps alot

Great poem, It is uniquly written that what i like about it.
Thanx 4 comment it was uplifting.

Still awaiting.... these words seems to be timeless holding all the emotions hope, pain entiwned together.

Good write
chavii.

This neat work was real nice. The seemingly melancholic emotions emanated by your words made me breathless for a moment. They danced across the page like the cherry blossoms in spring... How endearing. What's more, I liked the idea of a hopelessly hopeful person patiently waiting to be loved by the one who brought back the colors in his life. Beautiful and heartfelt to say the least. All the best and take care.

This is a really great poem.
i love it
i could tell where you were coming from
and what you were trying to say
and how you were feeling
and it takes loads of talent to be able to make readers see that
keep up the good work (:
<3jess

Fantastic poem. i don;t what else i can say. beautiful.

Its a beautiful and a nice job! well done dear. write more and let me know...

Nazeer

Wow, nicely done!! 5/5

Beautiful writings..
Excellent thoughts..
Marvelous outlooks..
Fantastic feelings..
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Write more, feel more and be with me for reading and commenting.. I like your poems very much indeed... 5/5

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Nazeer

Really nice job
5/5

Nope...not cool. Thats too awsome. Why must you be so talented and able to express you emotions in such a beautiful way?????

Thats so beautiful...i had a dream about everyting aruond me moving at lightning fast speed yet i was still...your poem really relates to that...where are we in this world? Everything is moving but we are waiting for people we lvoe...it is amazing...

It was really so touching and so sad.It reminded of some friends who I have lost them many years ago,but still haven't lost the hope to see them again.

well done 5\5...