Comments : Beseech The Night (Sonnet I)

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    What a breathtaking Sonnet. Your words of love are stunning.

    Your sweet caress my empty arms denied
    Longing words fall to silent lonely cries
    A poet's verse to quell the ebbing tide
    Through lips bereft of whispered breaths and sighs

    How I relate to this verse. Touches me heart so deeply.
    ~CLAP~CLAP~CLAP~
    Love Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Mr M

    That's just beautiful....

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Deb,

    What a beautiful sonnet. loved the word usage. Especially loved this stanza:

    "Oh Love! beseech the night's divine intent
    One last bequest of morning's perfect smile
    Against thy breast a beating heart content
    Embracing gentle comfort for a while"

    Absolutely breathtaking. The imagery and flow was excellent.

    Bravo, dear friend.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Poem speaks and plays melodies .........
    stunningly beautiful.....

    I wish i could find words to compliment what you have written.... mmmmmmmmmm

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    This is amazing. A truly beautiful, sincere and honest love poem. I've tried sonnets before, but yours is just incomparable. I'm at a loss for words. This is by far one of my favourite love poems on the site. Never stop writing. 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Wow! I was in awe reading this sonnet. It's absolutely beautiful. It was such a stunning success, Miss Debbie. For a moment, I was carried away by your words to another heavenly realm [of thought]. That's how breathtaking and compelling your words are. I hope you keep on writing what you feel and like. All the best and take care. Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    What a poems...My pleasure to read this Marvellous sonnet.. yet within Beautiful emotions penned you portrait here, one of beautiful sonnet i have read..... Well done!

    "Longing words fall to silent lonely cries
    A poet's verse to quell the ebbing tide"

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Isn't that special!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a compicatedly beautiful metaphors!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I didn't mean to put an a in the above comment. I also wanted to add that I love the ending of the piece. Nice way to finish it off!

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Perfect, absolutely breathtaking,amazing,
    captivating........special beyond words......
    as for the ending......well.......

    You can find a dream and live it....

    As for the poem?
    The one that will run on and on.....
    Very beautiful....beyond any words

  • 10 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Wow, wonderful poem! Meaningful, too. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by chavii

    Amazing beauty this poem holds.Very heartfelt and deeply moving descriptions.Great poem .

    Best Wishes
    chavii.

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Debb your poem is flawless. You describe things in such a way the saliva oozes out for a while ;). The word choice is as always outstanding. God bless you dear

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    You proably already know it.. this is brilliant.. Very amazing.. must say the way you play with words is infatuating..

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very nice. beautiful words. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    I love sonnets,someday I`ve got to try one,this was superb,If I could do half this good I`d be happy. very touching.

  • 10 years ago

    by Emma

    I love your writing style its beautiful 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by the come back

    Wonderfull poem 5/5 ^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    WonderfuF poeM! MeaningfuL, toO. 5/5

    LUZAn