Well, this one I truly do not agree on. It doesn't make sense to space it out at such a degree...

There's no purpose in changing an already simple and effective structure, which is what you had to start with. It's fine the way it is.

This was beautiful.
I liked how it was simple honestly, it doesn't actually tell a story of what really happened to Sam but it did tell it as being around then passing away. you did an amazing job and im sorry about your lost.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

This was wonderful, I love the style.. Keep on keeping on... :)
5/5

Such a sad, emotional yet touching poem. I loved the style of this. 5/5, Em xx

Beautiful...5/5