Frozen

by AlexTheLion11   Aug 5, 2007


I hate it when you don't pay attention to me,
I hate it when you don't care.
There's so many things I hate about you,
But most of all- when you're not there.

I hate how you make me feel this way,
And it makes me want to cry.
It's a f-ing cycle that I can't stand.
It makes me go crazy; out of my mind.

I know you can't feel or see my pain,
But I selfishly wish you could.
Hey- no one said it would be easy.
But I hate it, even though it feels so good.

And I know I won't be able,
To ever let you go.
But here's something I'd like for you to know.

You're my life and my love; you're so much greater than that.
You're the sky and the sea; my knees when they're weak.
You're my walk, you're my talk, you're so great; it's true.

So here... a poem.
Dedicated to you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    Awww!!! i really liked that!!1 it was really sweet!!! good job!!!!! :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hey fork Great poem 5/5 from spoon, and knife.....XD ill ttyl keep up your great work

    spoon your l-l

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hey fork Great poem 5/5 from spoon, and knife.....XD ill ttyl keep up your great work

    spoon your l-l

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Weird..but good. it's like hatred and love for one person..well that's exactly what it is but yah...it's good..5/5

    xxMandaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by XDeesxToxicxCookiesX

    I loved it!!!It's full of meanings,and feelings.Im waiting to read another one ;).