Great work 5/5 indeed

This is REALLY good. i love it i do i do indeed! thanks for the comment! :-)

Oh wow.. I so know what you are talking about in this poem. Just had my ex go for a whole month to see his dad for the summer right? and he said he would call if he could. Not one call =/ until the day he was supposed to arrive back home. My mom handed me the phone saying it was my bf and I was so happy and he sounded so sad. I finally figure out that he wanted to break up with me ... Said something that I deserve better, That he felt bad for not calling. Which is pissy I wanted and worried a whole month and then get a phone call like that but yeah that poem i so know how you felt. Sad hate waiting :P 5/5 Awesome poem!! I'm surprised I can read slang ;) lol

Wow nice poem i love it :P 5/5

It's good you should make it into a song!

Awwe so sad. seems that you really care for this girl, i hope she realizes soon that she's gotta man who loves her. You're kind of like my boyfriend, he quit selling drugs and doing them to be with me, you seem like a very good guy. I hope everything with the girl goes well.

Greak work and i loved the flow. 5/5