Me & U

ZacLuva,
I think that this was a pretty basic topic, but you could make it better by adding more. Perhaps some different words and such. It's only an idea, so do as you please. For example:

We sat
and ate
and fed each other

Change that stanza to something like:

We sat under the leaves,
Of the cherry blossom tree,
And ate in the cool breeze,
And fed each other with ease.

Well, that's really bad, but you get the point. Making the poem rhyme might also be a good idea, but you don't have to (In the example I put, the first two lines and last two lines rhymed).
Don't get me wrong though, you're on your way ^_^.
Keep it up, and I'd probably say 3/5. With some of these changes though, that could go up.

With all due Respect,
Hatori

P.S. If you get a chance, could you please rate and comment one of my poems?
Thanks!

Umm sorry but that made so sense