Comments : Who are you

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Wow. Very good. I loved the repetition of "who are you?". That really emphasized the importance of that question.

    The last stanza was my favourite, it was a very good ending.

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    I like the repitition in this one. Made me want to read it until the end. I read it about five times. Who ARE you?
    Love Greta (Your wife)

    Take Care

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffaney

    Beautiful poem

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Compared to the first poem this was nice, i like how u repeat some words and lines. flow was okay and on how u describe your imagination were good. KEEP IT UP!!

  • 16 years ago

    by LURVE

    Nice poem, i really like it!(o:

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    It seems that those who make some sort of impact in our lives, whether good or bad, always leaving us asking "who" and "why".

    I like how you stayed with the same question as far as who... and then went on to illustrate the what in each verse.

    This is one of those poems that leaves the reader searching with in themselves for their own ghost and the "who" in their own life.

    --Sher

  • 14 years ago

    by Hebe

    Really can relate on this one. A person who left such a big impression in some way, just by see him/her once,, weird actually.
    Very nice,,

    Take care