Comments : LUCIUS: REDUX

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Amazing, amazing... so amazing! Great choice of words, vivid imagery... I like everything about this poem.
    5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    "In fading bloody embers" ... the word choice is perfection! Excellent write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mo

    Short and powerful. I like the words you chose to use and the imagry it gives. Cant wait for you to write more Gary! :)

    Mo

  • 10 years ago

    by Wake

    Truly felt it from this one..
    an amazing write..
    such descriptively short and so beautiful.. AMAZING

    ~Wake~

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Your use of imagery was well placed in this one! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Fantastic poem, short but so impressing. I like everything about it, well done! I really love the way you wrote it, so deep and you said many things with just a few words.