• 11 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    You sent me to the dictionary ... nice job. Can't believe I had to look up eldritch ... could have kicked myself afterwards. Love poems that do that though.

    As to the poem, another excellent write, my friend.

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful write. The imagery is awesome. Brings such a stark image to the minds eye.

    as I stand bathed in it's light
    surrounded by soft blue shadows,
    stark and solitary,
    like a scarecrow in a field
    of pale blackness.

    I love your ending what a perfect picture to invision.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Patience

    I love your choice of wording. You did a fantastic job with this piece, I pictured each description as i read along.


  • 11 years ago

    by chanel

    I love this write it was enjoying I pictured every moment of it as if I were there