Bring On The Bloody Tear

by Michelle18   Aug 21, 2007


Stab me in the heart,
Rip it in two.
Tear me apart,
Make your wish come true.

You want me to die?
Well baby Im right here.
Come on make me cry,
Bring on the bloody tear.

You already broke my heart,
When you wished I'd die and go to hell.
You said you have a new girl,
You already killed me, cant you tell?

If you didnt really mean it,
Then think before you speak.
Because my heart cant take it,
I'm feeling so weak.

So stab me in the heart,
Rip it in two.
Tear me apart,
Make your wish come true.

You want me to die?
Well baby Im right here.
Come on make me cry,
Bring on the bloody tear.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I wish you can hit my heart now and rip it in 2

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Still enjoying readin it , it was a great one really touch me inside , it si my faorite one!!!

    great work i wish i can vote again for you
    :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Empathy

    I found your rhythm is this poem brilliant! It allows the poem to flow very well and your emotion is clearly expressed within in it as well. Nice work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I will add this to my favorite

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Very good one , i can feel the sorrow and lost

    nice one

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