Comments : The Echo of The Night

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Incredibly written poem! You have one mistake in the third stanza, you used word -sky- two times and that destroys flow. I like the topic, atmosphere is amazing and it is really haunting. Last two stanzas are greatest.
    Well done 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Another great piece from you. a very enjoyable read the whole way through.. great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Beautiful poem, I went all quiet inside while reading it!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like the flow of this piece very much. Whole poem is greatly written, with excellently created dark atmosphere. The imagery in it is very vivid.
    The ending is effective.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -The moon, so round and bright
    against the velvet night,
    the stars twinkle with a thousand colors
    and a star shoots across the sky.-

    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by mikaella

    WOw your imagery is great and it kept me hooked ilove it! you should comment my poems