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Incredibly written poem! You have one mistake in the third stanza, you used word -sky- two times and that destroys flow. I like the topic, atmosphere is amazing and it is really haunting. Last two stanzas are greatest.
Well done 5/5
Another great piece from you. a very enjoyable read the whole way through.. great job
by Ingrid de Klerck
Beautiful poem, I went all quiet inside while reading it!
I like the flow of this piece very much. Whole poem is greatly written, with excellently created dark atmosphere. The imagery in it is very vivid.
The ending is effective.
My favorite stanza is:
-The moon, so round and bright
against the velvet night,
the stars twinkle with a thousand colors
and a star shoots across the sky.-
Keep up, 5/5 from me
WOw your imagery is great and it kept me hooked ilove it! you should comment my poems