by Kalee Aug 23, 2007
category :
Internet slang /
love, romance
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Sitting on the bus |
by shell
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I like this.... |
by ECILA ice
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As i read this poem i can't help not to smile not because you did something wrong but you remind me of myself.. very cute poem, i know a lot of people could really relate on this one..great job! But to be honest with you just enhance your imagination and vocabulary to make this poem more alluring and uniquely awesome.. keep it up! |
by Crystal Gaze
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Beatiful Flow. |
by Veamm
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Its cute..well thinking, thinking makes me sleepy lol..well try to use deep words try not use common words..ok 5/5 for it..i hope more..take care!! |
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Hey that was a fun little poem keep it up |