Wow, every line is so powerful, amazingly written. Whole poem is so deep, it holds so much truth with greatly created atmosphere. The ending is simple, yet so effective and superb.
My favorite stanza is the first one.
Truly well done, 5/5 from me
"There's a thin line,
no, an almost nonexistent division
between being negative and being realistic."
^that beggining just took me away..there's so much truth in it.
This piece expressed such a great view in life that you seem to hold. The world is cold but there's still hope. I LOVE the poem. It really made me think. It was just so well done. wonderful work! =]
Wow like the two coments before me this poem is truely unique and i often find myself wondering about how anne frank must have felt and to know that all the van daans and the franks died except otto i know that i shouldnt be thinking such morbid thoughts but its so sad and horrible that the nazis brang so must devistation to not only the jews but blacks, homeless, and gays.... i really respect you writing a poem on anne frank she is infact one of my heros and i thank god that she is remembered threw nice people like you and i and threw so many across loads of nations i believe that her story shall and will live on for generations to come and i can not explain how happy this poem made me ..... and i am truly impressed that u managed to stick in one of her famous poems ( not matter what i will always believe that people are good at heart)....truely utterly breathtaking and maginficent....ive never ever expressed my feelings like this im a 14 year old girl who keeps everyhting in but u my friend have won my respect....