I loved this whole piece, your use of description and the sadness you evoked. I am glad you entered it, you definetely desrved to win. I especially like the way you ended it, again it evoked a great image in my head. Great Job!
This piece touched me in many ways. I lost my grandmother in September and she was like a mother to me and my sister. Reading this sadden my heart but also made me smile knowing that her memory is still very vivid to me. Thank you.