Great job wit the poem n if you dont mind could you read sum of mines n tell me wat chu think

Wow such great portrayal of emotions another great 1 im adding u to my favs.another 5/5. u rock.=)

Cory

I like this poem.
the heart has two things it does
and one is known yet the other isnt
but for that matter you can make them both known yet making the unknown known is the hardest thing sometimes.
Expecially when it comes too love.
thats whatt this poem reminds me of..
and the fact that loving someone and them loving you back is the happiest feeling in the world.

I really loved this one. It reminds me of how I felt the first time I had a crush. It was beautiful and very descriptive. Nice work! =)

This is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!
love it!!!!!!!!!!
all i need to say.

LOVE IT!!
And it's so true.

I loved this. so good

Great poem ... so true
5/5

I loved this.

You are such a talented writer, and I love reading your poetry.

Nice job love.

5/5

*Nice poem. loved it* =)

I like this one a ton too. It's written gorgeously.
In a way it reminds me of the way Edgar Allen Poe wrote.