A greatly written poem with great emotion... you have done a great job.
keep up the great work as you are really amazing..

a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it.

Okay...I love this.

This whole piece just screams out with power and darkness...I love the repetition at the end, a very good line to use for the repeat...elegantly written.

This a very dark and powerful read. I the loved the concept. The flow here was quite nice too. 5/5

marcella

I think this is definitly your genre. It was just bone chilling and really well written.
Loved the darkness.
Keep it up.
--Elly.