Comments : As Blood Runs Black (monody/free verse)

  • 10 years ago

    by ThreeSixtyChanges

    Nice poem!

    i love it!

    i felt the darkness inside it!

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, dark love poem... Very unique, I like it a lot. The choice of words in it is great, and the atmosphere that you created through the piece is so dark and haunting. Whole poem contains very vivid imagery, too. The ending is really powerful and effective.
    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, dark and sad, but well written simply a beautiful piece, great job, keep it up ,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Timothy r

    This was such an emotional piece, I read it a few times and it just got better everytime. You truly have talent my dear. great job. Timothy r

  • 10 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Its amazing how something so tragic can create such a beautiful piece, you have a lot of emotion in this one, keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Run out of words

    that's a really good poem.
    The word usage was really good, because the way you described every stanza made the words come to life.
    Really beautiful =]