This was well penned.
The flow was flawless, the content expressive, all in all, I really like this peice.
well done,
5/5

This is a really good poem. It is extreamely well written. The flow was wonderful. The wording was perfect. 5/5

Kalee

This is a five. It was inspirational and moving. Good choice of words. I'm quite fond of the title as well. Good work.