Comments : I have to go.

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    That was sad yet so beautifully done ,and left a tear in my eye.I moved away and I managed to stay there for 5 years but I missed my dad so much eventually I had to move back to be closer and theres no way I would ever move that far away from him again.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lisa

    Absolutely beautiful. It took my breath away. Great job, keep it up!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    The bond between a parent and a child is one that will always be.

    Although I know I am right with what I have to do
    My heart is still broken, torn in two
    My love for her is stronger than bricks and mortar
    She is my babe, my one and only daughter
    Her tears did freely flow
    As I told her I have to go.

    These lines are so heartbreaking. No matter how old our children get they are still our babies.
    Excellent job my friend.
    ((Hugs)) Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by So Wrong its Right

    B-E-A-UTIFUL!!! ( i put that in peoples and i don't know if they get it but oh well!) it was interesting because it was a sad and happy kind of sad. i don't know but i love it because of the fact that i don't know. great job!!! 5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I cannot imagine what I could say that hasn`t been said. I read this a few times just to get something new each time. Fantastically penned my friend. Timothy r

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    Beautiful! No amount of distance can alter a bond this strong,I hope you find a way to stay close and be together as much as possible, a great tribute to her.

  • 10 years ago

    by summernights

    Absolutley amazing. I had goose bumps. So full of emotion.. I do hope you get to see your daughter again

  • 10 years ago

    by dora

    Aww what a sad and touching story.. great job on this one xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Wow...I think you are a great dad!
    Beautiful poem too.

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by babyPB

    This is sad, yet inspiring.
    a father's love to her beloved daughter.
    thats sweet. <33
    5/5