Oh that was so sweet and very good 5/5

This breathtaking creature, our angel
does her very best for us all
but sadly shes slowly passing away
as us mortals slowly lose sight
of whats important in life

I loved this stanza, it reminds me of what I heard someone say a long time ago: the dolpins are leaving this earth because their message of love we are unable to recieve. I cried when I heard this...so sad.

This poem is a 5/5 but should receive a 10!

Best wishes for you, Rhea

Ingridxx

Great poem! i love the way you worded it! 5/5
keep up the great work!
xx love