Haha it's quite funny and witty being modernised like so. However, Shakespeare's Sonnet was longer so perhaps she could make a few more verses. Nice rendition anyway.
cheers, josh

Lol... funny

I found this Sonnet Hilarious!

I have not seen anyone on P&Q write a sonnet. I think I will do it. I will look for any of Shakespeare's sonnets and do one myself! ^_^

Again, hilarious!

I give you all my 5 rep.

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_Sam

I love it.. very cute and unsual poem.. very funny and uniwue indeed. a short and flawless one .

Lol..cute and funny

LOL :p

hahahahha this is hilarious :p