Comments : Trust: The greatest lie

  • 10 years ago

    by geeeeee

    Trust gives people power,
    Of which they always abuse,
    So sick of this disappointment,
    Not going to be used.

    ^^ I really liked this stanza because its so true. As they say you can only trust one person in the world and that is yourself. I also liked the wording because it gives the sense of standing up for yourself against people abusing your trust, it shows strength of character. Great job.

    Take Care.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow....this poem has so much truth to it, and i felt the pwerful emotions expressed in this poem. you put this together artistically and i envy you for it. great job!!!!!! loved it

  • 10 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    A man once said trusting someone is merly lieing to yourself well.... that meant something and so does this! it was a great piece!

  • 10 years ago

    by annamarie

    Omg...dat is so true...my mom tell me da same thing everytime...beautiful...

  • 10 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Very nice poem, very deep
    unfortunately, what you are saying is the truth...but am sure not all of them like this...there must be faithful people and there must be people like YOU who has been into this...if you run away from people they will keep following you especailly the bad ones but if you faced them and searched for the good you will find them one day and am sure about it

  • 10 years ago

    by IllNeverBGoodEnouf

    Hmm..I think I agree with what your saying in this poem. good job! keep writing!

  • 10 years ago

    by damont

    This has so much truth and the title caught my eye. its interesting and true. wonderful written and the examples used couldn't be better. what inspired you to write it?

  • 10 years ago

    by Claudd

    Wow this poem is very touching

    it shows what alot of people feel

    =)

    keep it up 5/5

    =)

    claud_x

    xOx

  • 9 years ago

    by ChAsInG PavEmEnTs

    I love this poem!! you're very talented

  • 9 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Trust.
    That word always reminds me of a shortbread biscuit - easily snapped.
    Your poem echoes my sentiments, but in a way that is all your own and full of raw emotion.
    Well done!
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    This has happen to me way to many times. </3

  • 9 years ago

    by Jake

    Awsome poem! :) gl on future onez

  • 9 years ago

    by kati

    This is an amazing poem!!!
    Very emotional...I love it

  • 9 years ago

    by she

    Awsome i love it

  • 9 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great poem. This is something my mom always says lol. This poem is truthful. Great job 5/5
    -vino

  • 9 years ago

    by Not

    I love this poem....and i hate liars...sadly there are several liars in the world but i guess you can call it there bad habit...great poem once again!!!..=)

  • 9 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This was a very powerful poem... amazing job! I loved your choice of words and all of the metaphors. You hit on a topic that is so unbelievably true and did a great job at writing it down on paper! Keep up the amazing work!
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by my demons

    Thank you for that..

  • 9 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Yeah...i know what u mean.btw great poem <333

  • 9 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Wow. Speechless.

    No person can be trusted,
    They'll take what they need,
    Then throw you away,
    Wrapped up in their own greed.

    The ones you trust the most,
    Will leave you lying on the floor,
    Your heart bleeding out,
    And they're walking out the door.

    ^^ These two stanzas are my favorite. You have talent! A very welcomed talent that fits you so well. I enjoyed this poem very much.

    I hope to see more from you!

    5/5