I really like reading your poems and this one is just another really great one! im a bit dim with all this poetry stuff but i still think this one has eral depth to it, so many people could find something in this one. :)

Wow, people may think it's a bad poem, but it's really good. The rhyming helped the poem look good and I love the structure in this. I absolutely loved it! Good job!

.:CiNdY:.

I don't see why people would think this is bad, because I loved it. It was unique and creative, which is something you don't find too often in a poem. :) The flow was flawless, and the emotions were intense. The only thing I didn't like too much was the fact that you used the word 'they' a lot. But other than that, I think this was amazing. :) Overall: 5.5

- Steph.