Comments : This Should Be Familiar

  • 10 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    "And the sun giving up its taste of things;"
    I absolutely love this one! As do I with all of your writing. I look forward to reading more from you!
    :]

  • 10 years ago

    by limp

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  • 10 years ago

    by Lisa

    Great work on this poem
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

  • 10 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "But I'm sure, as I recall,
    I don't remember you at all."

    those two lines right there, MADE the poem, awesome work

  • 10 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    "But I'm sure, as I recall,
    I don't remember you at all."

    That ended up being my favorite. Don't know why.. Just had a ring to it. Or maybe it was just rude.. and I like rude.

    Good job, Laura and Luce.

  • 10 years ago

    by colourmehappy

    "But I'm sure, as I recall,
    I don't remember you at all."

    those two lines right there, MADE the poem, awesome work

    i agree, really i loved it.
    :)

  • 9 years ago

    by limp

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