New poemss!! Lol.
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in order to keep my dream alive, I overcome all strife
Im unstoppable,-In my Focused State of Mind.
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I loved the ending here. Very inspirational poem. I love that whole "focused state of mind" thing. Keep writing. 5/5

` Liz =]

I LOVE IT. IM DEF TRYINNA STAY FOCUSED MAN. IS TIME 2 START THINKIN BOUT DA FUTURE

This is an interesting way of putting feeling into words! I would never be able to write like this! 5/5