I agree. I was interesting aswell, i was hooked throught it the whole poem. And you summed up how an anerexic would feel very well. I hope you not going through that. Keep up the writing it was good (-:

Very good rhyming,and the poem dragged me in,i couldent stop reading it!! i really hope this is not what your going through..
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Really amazing poem i felt all the emotions and what u have gone through.....

ashleigh

Awesome poem, really well written, I was anorexic and it sounds like how an anorexic feels. Really heartfelt, hope this isn't happening to you....

SAD!!!! but suoper true! the life so many go thru added it 2 mii favs!

This is beautifully written. the emotion and depth you put into this piece is amazing, easily felt by the reader. the flow is good throughout the piece and the imagery you painted created very vivid pictures for me. "Why don't you just eat, is what they constantly repeat" << how i loved those lines. so much power and intensity and sadly i can relate. you did a wonderful job with this.

I agree with others.
it reallly....wow this is beautifully writen ever i read!
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i wondering if you would check out my poems.

Wow..thats really beep. i kno how you feel. i HATE what i put myself thro and yet i still do it...ya kno? well im always here if you need to talk...im a good listener and i dont judge