Really nice, and well written.

I csn just feel that you are deeply in love with your Mike!
I hope he loves yuo the way you love him, or even more than that.

wrtten with passion, ooh, I wish I was loved like that.

your poem is lovely my sister.

That a phenomenal love poem Khanyi that u dedicated to Mike and I hope he is happy that u the 1st to write him a poem and it was tremendous too- i hope he will realize how he is loved and he will requite that love to you- your poem is expressed nicely and it has a sweet content- 'it all in your eyez or in your touch but somewhere in between i know it love and it is true'- ooh! that line has attract my attention for a several seconds- all those thrilling words including that your love is true- make it clear how much you feel and that your feelings is real- wish the best and great poem.