Comments : The Broken Heart Barrier

  • 10 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    Very good!!

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like this one a lot...
    The rhymes are very good, and you created intense atmosphere through the piece. The choice of words and the descriptions in it are excellent.
    Very deep, too.
    Keep writing!
    5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by StormyStar

    HAHA you dont write well? MY ASS! lol this is great! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow! I love it! Amazing poem and very uplifting in the last peice! Love it! Keep it up, your an awesome writer!

  • 10 years ago

    by Shyla

    So very true, this poem captures the feelings of so many, weather they know it or not. Great work, keep it up! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    Hey bro.
    I really loved the way you used Rhyme scheming in this one. depicted good emotion.
    voted and gave it a 5/5
    please return the favor......
    -peace