Comments : Butterfly Kisses

  • 9 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    That is so cute, i wash i could find a world like that!! very well written. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    This has to be the best poem i have ever read!!!!!!! you are amazing!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by chickadee

    Thankyou so much i have now got something to read to my niece when she gets scared at night that was gourgus

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah Nicole

    I like ur poem is so magical
    well have a great day

  • 9 years ago

    by victoria

    It is great.

  • 9 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Wow! it made me kind of drift away for a second there!!! its awesome!
    taegan - emily xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wow Wonderful poem. It is so sweet.......

    I will give it 20/5

  • 9 years ago

    by elizabeth

    This is good 5/5 could u read mine and comment plz

  • 9 years ago

    by Syndicate

    Wow..that was just..so beautiful. Reading it made me feel like a little kid again. Maybe if I remember it, one day I'll tell this poem to my children :]

  • 9 years ago

    by TAYLOR

    Woah, this poem is amazing :)
    Love it

  • 9 years ago

    by jek pen cries

    No comment.... but..
    AWESOME!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Lucy

    I enjoyed it, but did not understand, this was my comedy, very "up beat"...very not me, which does not mean much, lol, ive never had this kind of dreamland, it seems sometimes i've been even too scared to go off into any sort of dream, mine are very grim, but on the other hand there is this jealousy...a nice picture you have painted, butterflies and pixie dust...it reminds me a lot of my five year old sisters room and reality at the moment

  • 9 years ago

    by Fabio Duran

    It does bring back memories of childhood as somebody mentioned. It flows very nicely and is nice to read.

  • 9 years ago

    by XUrXLossXNotXMineX

    Amazing work
    i love this poem
    it makes me think of when i was little
    great job keep writing

  • 9 years ago

    by AndreaDanielle

    This poem is so cute,
    i wish i could write like this.
    keep up the good work..
    xoxo andrea danielle.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kelsie

    Wow. this is amazing. your ability to paint this serene,beautiful picture in my mind while still rhyming is insane. i loved reading this, it was like a little mental escape.
    5/5. great job.

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel

    It was simply amazing

  • 9 years ago

    by kongie vangie

    A i love it..keep it up...

  • 9 years ago

    by samantha

    This is rly good

  • 9 years ago

    by Lithium

    That is an absolutely magical piece, i myself luv to read abotu fantasy and the magic that surrounds us all, your words are so soft you can see the gentle thought put into this wonderful piece. xox sam