Comments : Until we kiss again!

  • 16 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Dang you, Queenie. Now I really want to go kiss someone. Sheeeeeeit.

    I know you said you just sort of write what comes to you, without much thought for technicality. But I have to say, this one just sort of "happened" quite well. : D You definitely captured a particular mood. First kisses. Hum de ho hum hoo.. sigh! It's sexy, but not vulgar in the least. I liked the repetition of the "I know you know I know" theme. I think it sort of mirrors the awkwardness of those first kisses - how you play between the joking and the sincere, to sort of preserve yourself, just in case, and both of you know that you're doing it, but can't totally let on. Hmmm.

    K, bring on the boy.