Comments : Deciduous (haiku)

  • 10 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    I really love this Haiku..
    it truely was written beautifully :)
    voted and gave you a 5/5 of course
    please return the favor

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is a Senryu, not a Haiku. A Haiku is written of this format, about nature. A Senryu is the same format written on emotion.
    This was good, but I was hoping for more from the title which is a rather deep word. Or big, rather.
    But it was still good.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mel

    Good to see you're still up there with the best, sir

  • 8 years ago

    by Polaroid

    I've always been fond of haikues, the length always gets me, you have to get all that meaning into three small structured lines. If you don't it doesn't work at all. It takes skill to work out what to put and it takes brains to make it work. Yours worked, and personally i thought it was brilliant....

    I read a comment you wrote awhile ago on one of my very first poems on this site. That comment helped me alot, to structure my poems more, even though i still have a long ways to go. Just wanted to say thanks!.

    -polaroid...