Comments : Honesty in 100 years

  • 10 years ago

    by Pete

    Honestly. Simply amazing.
    I'm nominating this poem, its just awe inspiring. I would possibly recommend a title change. For the words that are in the poem are so much more profound that the title that accompanies it.

    The flow was perfectly timed from line to line. Word placement and vocabulary are extremely good.
    I have yet to see a poem about life as good as this piece of literature, if this truly is your first piece of writing for some time... Why on earth did you ever stop?!

    "I've plowed and I've sown, but I've forgotten the reaping"
    Fantastic line .. and sums up so much of life itself.

    Truly great work, couple this with your age and it's just amazing.

    [Nominated]

    ~Pete.

  • 10 years ago

    by Viola

    "Feel how fast your years have passed by
    and tell me you've finished all that you like
    I can be positive you're telling a lie
    Because nobody's really ready to ever say goodbye"

    ^Oh goodness that is so true. This poem is fantastic. It sumarizes life exceptionally well. I LOVE every line of it. Wow. I don't even know what else to say...I am very much amazed. Great work! keep it up. =]
    --Viola

  • 10 years ago

    by ♥shyann♥

    Wow that was incredible!!! you obviously have talent.....i found this poem not only unique but it flowed beautifully...you did a great job 5/5:)

  • 10 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Exellent poem, full of interesting vocabulary :D nice job hun xxx alex xxx