Comments : No More Cloudy Days

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis a very good poem cindy, love the ending stanza, and the flow tis great, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A very sad and heartfelt Poem, however a joy to read.. Well done Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow Cindy...this is extremely beautiful, ur wordings are just too soft and melodious.
    i wish i could be a crocodile on sunny beach with ur book of

    honestly speaking...its really outstanding...loved it.

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Eternity of peace
    Warmed by God's loving gaze
    Shroud of gloom now lifted
    No More cloudy days

    sad yet also uplifting, no more cloudy days means clear skies ahead.

    well done, 5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.Another beautiful poem.Peace at heart is all one can feel.Keep it up.Take care.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck


    This one was sad but also full of hope!
    I loved it!!

    Take care, my sweet friend


  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Ending a long and painful fight

    realy relates to me.... im young though. and i have to see this world. but this poem realy relates to me. anyways take care

  • 10 years ago

    by chavii

    Beautiful, heart warming poem cindy, well done.

    Light replaces longing
    To set my soul at ease
    Our reunited love
    Is carried on a breeze

    Most beautiful lines, such deep meaning :)

    Love and wishes

  • 10 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    A wonderful verse, Cindy, with all the ingredients of what goes into the making of life - there's sadness yes, but always the sun waits.

    lovely reading your work again

    peace, love and luck

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You always write such beautiful work and the flow and messages in them are precise and passionate.

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    I love this! I don't know what to say, lol. Love the message in it and and it was beautiful. I'm speechless =/ 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats a beautiful poem, i hope i got the meaning right, but it sounds hopeful, something to look forward for, great job cindy, no doubt about it, xox sam

  • 10 years ago

    by xXMohawkedMahemXx

    Wow...I really liked this one =]


  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cindy this so hauntingly beautiful I can feel the sadness and longing breathe through your lines. Although this is a sad poem....I know you have intended to end it on that ray of hope that you carry in your heart for John.
    Very spiritual...

    I love what you have done with the title for the contest and the rhyme and flow are impeccable.

    "Light replaces longing
    To set my soul at ease
    Our reunited love
    Is carried on a breeze"

    ^my favorite verse!....I can picture spirits soaring off to Heaven....just beautiful. Thanks for entering the contest....awesome job! Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Excellent poetry skills, classical touch.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jackie

    You put your all into writing poetry, another beautiful poem, tugs at the heart strings, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Beautiful poem Cindy..........

  • I enjoyed reading your poem, and everything that needed to be said about it has already been said. so i will end this with saying great job *Twiggy*

  • 10 years ago

    by HvN

    This is I-N-C-R-E-D-I-B-L-E!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Polaroid

    I don't really believe in God, but that was a really great poem, keep it up