Tis a very good poem cindy, love the ending stanza, and the flow tis great, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

A very sad and heartfelt Poem, however a joy to read.. Well done Cindy

Wow Cindy...this is extremely beautiful, ur wordings are just too soft and melodious.
i wish i could be a crocodile on sunny beach with ur book of poems.....lol

honestly speaking...its really outstanding...loved it.

all the best and take care

Eternity of peace
Warmed by God's loving gaze
Shroud of gloom now lifted
No More cloudy days

sad yet also uplifting, no more cloudy days means clear skies ahead.

well done, 5/5 David

5/5.Another beautiful poem.Peace at heart is all one can feel.Keep it up.Take care.

Cindy,

This one was sad but also full of hope!
I loved it!!

Take care, my sweet friend

love,
Ingrid

Ending a long and painful fight

realy relates to me.... im young though. and i have to see this world. but this poem realy relates to me. anyways take care

Beautiful, heart warming poem cindy, well done.

Light replaces longing
To set my soul at ease
Our reunited love
Is carried on a breeze

Most beautiful lines, such deep meaning :)

Love and wishes
chavii.

A wonderful verse, Cindy, with all the ingredients of what goes into the making of life - there's sadness yes, but always the sun waits.

lovely reading your work again

peace, love and luck
shobhana

You always write such beautiful work and the flow and messages in them are precise and passionate.
5/5

I love this! I don't know what to say, lol. Love the message in it and and it was beautiful. I'm speechless =/ 5/5

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Thats a beautiful poem, i hope i got the meaning right, but it sounds hopeful, something to look forward for, great job cindy, no doubt about it, xox sam

Wow...I really liked this one =]

.:HammY:.

Cindy this so hauntingly beautiful I can feel the sadness and longing breathe through your lines. Although this is a sad poem....I know you have intended to end it on that ray of hope that you carry in your heart for John.
Very spiritual...

I love what you have done with the title for the contest and the rhyme and flow are impeccable.

"Light replaces longing
To set my soul at ease
Our reunited love
Is carried on a breeze"

^my favorite verse!....I can picture spirits soaring off to Heaven....just beautiful. Thanks for entering the contest....awesome job! Love, Debbie

Excellent poetry skills, classical touch.

You put your all into writing poetry, another beautiful poem, tugs at the heart strings, 5/5

Beautiful poem Cindy..........

I enjoyed reading your poem, and everything that needed to be said about it has already been said. so i will end this with saying great job *Twiggy*

This is I-N-C-R-E-D-I-B-L-E!!

I don't really believe in God, but that was a really great poem, keep it up
5/5
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