Wow, so short but again totally mind-blowing poem!
You showed core of this piece with every word and you have so powerful message, I truly admire your writing and you amazed me with this poem cause you showed you much can be said with so little words.
How simple and perfect. Crazy how 15 little words can make such an impact. It really does prove that words are powerful things when put together.
I really do love this poem. It captures such hope in it. It is beautiful. I love your words..they touch me every time. I think that is because you always right straight from the heart and when people read it it hits right home.
Amazing work! =] You are a master at poetry.