Awsome poem dude!

WOW! Oh, this is one of the best poems I've every read! It is so POWERFUL! Every line is so fine!
Aspects of this brilliance kill every emotions in me and give me the emotions that you expressed in this brilliant piece.
My favorte stanzas are the first and the last, because they're so great, hun!
Keep up & have fun :}
Bye!

You really know how to pick a great title. Most of your poems have eye-catching title. Beside that you really know how to write!!!

Perfection was your eyes
That enrapturing glint
Hypnotizing the organ
Where my heart would be
The sensations
Of human mortality
Still linger, still dwell
Leaving me frightened
In a stage of red liquidation

That stanza's what I loved the most. I love your wordage. Another 5/5 job!!!