Comments : Higher walls for someone else

  • 10 years ago

    by Lenny

    That was a very powerful convergence of all the things about your past and present that you don't like, love. I still find it hard to envision you as that person when I read your works like this. Those wonderful words, blackberry cobblers, recess drowned....
    I think you used the lightning thunder metaphor a bit much, perhaps some synonyms needed there, but thats just being picky. Its a fantastic emotional eruption.