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  • 9 years ago

    by killcupidxoxo

    It was pretty good, very deep and so true, keep it up

  • 9 years ago

    by Rob Matt

    Ooh. simple and pretty. the ONLY thing i can say that MIGHT be not good and can be improved is "favourite" is used twice in a sentence, so its kinda repetitive (which isnt the purpose here like alliteration or anything). besides that its really good and i like it

  • 9 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Repetition adds emphasis to a certain word or idea

  • 8 years ago

    by emad

    I like it soooooo very much it's i'm trying to find the suitable world it's sweet well done

  • 7 years ago

    by SeLiNa MaRiE

    Awsome poem! I adore short poems and this one is so sweet. Great job.