I am in awe... speechless...
I think that I really can't express how much I loved this... Read it four times by now. It is so amazing, refreshing... the best dark poem I've read in a while and my new favorite from you. Breathtaking piece, with untamed atmosphere, filled with raw emotions and darkness, so effective and captivating. I am truly impressed. Whole piece flows so freely, with its overwhelming, haunting tones of superbly described emotions. This is truly a masterpiece- brilliantly written! I like the twist in the middle of the poem very much, it gave another dimension to the whole piece. The rhythm of the poems changes in some stanzas, like in "colors equal emotions" part when it fastens or in "and two marionettes make more than manipulator" when it slows down. I like everything about this piece, but you're probably bored by me, telling you how genius you are lol
Just keep writing!
I love your word :)
You rather a talented writer arn't you. ;)
Im looking forward to reading more from you.
Im a big fan or the dark and fantasy genre, and im impressed by someone that can create such a dreamlike state as the one that was created within this poem.
I loved the poem I havent been on since forever but I read your suggestion and I truly took no offense to it and im going to try it out after my poem Life, love and lies thanks and i loved thies poem i could a battle it was amazing 5/5
That... was so... wow... I can't even describe it... you have some great talent! that was so amazingly done and what makes it all so odd. Is I used to want to be able to write things such as that. But, I can never find the right words, but they seem to fit well with you lol! =] keep up the great work!
The title reaaly got my attention coz it itself consists opf such a great imaginary and creates a perfect atmosphere for the poem.
now about the poem: it's magical! i mean it's not like a usual accurate poem with 4-lined stanzas but really something unique. first i thought there was something wrong with rhythm, but i started reading it and realized it's great. It's very passionate and has such a strong metaphor of a dance. and the ending is unexpected though you reach it in your poem gradually.
and back to the meaning, it really made me puzzled. i believe you wrote about human realtions, probably love... how relations are much like dance where one seems a marionettte or the other but in the end you realize both were marionettes of each other or probably of destiny. it's hard to solve the puzzle of your marvelous poem but i tried. (and btw this puzzle meaning is what i really love in poems)
anyways, that is the impression i got.
and the last line with a question is such an elegant way to end a poem.