Wow a very unique sad poem truly i loved it the way you said hating the pen because it replaces your loved one in which you want the most i can relate nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

And i hate this pen I am holding because I should be holding you.

I hate this paper under my hand because it isn't you.
That in itself deserves a five. the entire poem is well written dear, i loved it. The prison i put myself in.