This is so intense and it has some eery imagery. Whole poem is absolutely unique, filled with effective, original and creative descriptions. Every stanza contains fantastically portrayed darkness.
Whole poem is impressive, it has some truly deep metaphors.
I can't choose my favorite part, every stanza is excellently written.
You packed up amount of brilliant, refreshing thoughts and ideas in this piece.
Whole poem also contains superbly expressed emotions.

Excellently done!
5/5 from me

Wowm this was really great. I liked how you emphasized FEAR by capitilizing it, and I also liked the elipses that gave the effect of a fuller line. Your imagery was also beautiful, and I really loved the line, "while I open eyes sodden with blood". Great job. =]

~Ash

That was amazing, im still awestruck, the repitition and energy was amazing, im astounded at the utter brilliance of this poem.

wow

wow

OMG this poem ... this poem left me speechless...It's like for a minute I entered a different world were everything is dark and miserable, I honestly felt the fear that you mentioned in your poem .
You have a very vivid imagination, and I respect that.

Great talent, keep it up. 5/5

Breathtaking. you write with such ardent imagination that blew me away from the first line. I am truly awed and mystified by your writing. you are an amazing poet. (:

How you came up with this is mind blowing. your words creep into my mind and stays there, making me think and ponder on the image created.

With that, you deserve 5/5, maybe more for this.

Beautifully written great work 5/5 indeed ^_^